Dear Vanessa,
For pronunciation,I would give you a 7 out of 10.Your pronunciation is clear but there are some mistakes.
For fluency,I would give you a 5 out of 10.Your reading is fluent but there is some hesitation.
For expression,I would give you a 3 out of 10.Most of the reading is monotonous with not much expressions.Try to read with more feelings and expressions.
Dear Vanessa,
For pronunciation, I would give you a 8 out of 10. Your pronunciation is clear but there are 3-4 mistakes. Mispronounced Words: “diseases”, “exhibition”, “community”.
For fluency, I would give you a 6 out of 10. Your reading is fluent but there is hesitation that is noticeable at some places.
For expression, I would give you a 4 out of 10. Most of the reading is monotonous with not much feeling. Try to read with more expression and feelings.
Be persistent, try again.
From everyone in 6 Peace
vnmh:
My reading passage page 40I think your reading is quite fast,slow down,but i still can understand what you are reading……
Dear Yusra,
Good try.yuor reading is clear but it is quite fast.Try to slow down and read with more feelings.Do not be panic.
Dear Yusra,
Well Done.Your reading is very clear. However, do try to slow down on your reading, pause at appropriate places and read with more expression and feelings. Try again.
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